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Màthair, an t-seòrs’ neo-chùmhnantaich…Mother, of the unconditional form…
Athair, an t-seòrsa dhìonaich…Father, of the protective form…
Seanmhair, an t-seòrsa ‘n àraich…Grandmother, of the nurturing form…
Seanair, an t-seòrsa abhcaidich…Grandfather, of the humorous form…
Piuthar-màthar ‘s piuthar-athar,Maternal and paternal aunt,
Bràthair-màthar ‘s bràthar-athar,Maternal and paternal uncle,
An t-seòrsa spòrsaich…Of the playful form…
Piuthar ‘s bràthair, an t-seòrsa spòrsaich…Sister and brother, of the playful form…
Peataichean, an t-seòrs’ neo-chùmhnantaich…Pets, of the unconditional form…
Càirdean, an t-seòrsa earbsaich…Friends, of the trustworthy form…
Leannan ‘s cèile, ‘n t-seòrsa dhìorrasaich…Sweetheart and spouse, of the passionate form…
Mac is nighean, an t-seòrs’ neo-chùmhnantaich…Son and daughter, of the unconditional form…
‘S e na h-aodannan a’ Ghràidh a th’anna…‘T is the faces of Love that it is…
Gràdh ‘na iomadh seòrsa…Love in its many forms…
Athair, an t-seòrsa dhìonaich…Father, of the protective form…
Seanmhair, an t-seòrsa ‘n àraich…Grandmother, of the nurturing form…
Seanair, an t-seòrsa abhcaidich…Grandfather, of the humorous form…
Piuthar-màthar ‘s piuthar-athar,Maternal and paternal aunt,
Bràthair-màthar ‘s bràthar-athar,Maternal and paternal uncle,
An t-seòrsa spòrsaich…Of the playful form…
Piuthar ‘s bràthair, an t-seòrsa spòrsaich…Sister and brother, of the playful form…
Peataichean, an t-seòrs’ neo-chùmhnantaich…Pets, of the unconditional form…
Càirdean, an t-seòrsa earbsaich…Friends, of the trustworthy form…
Leannan ‘s cèile, ‘n t-seòrsa dhìorrasaich…Sweetheart and spouse, of the passionate form…
Mac is nighean, an t-seòrs’ neo-chùmhnantaich…Son and daughter, of the unconditional form…
‘S e na h-aodannan a’ Ghràidh a th’anna…‘T is the faces of Love that it is…
Gràdh ‘na iomadh seòrsa…Love in its many forms…
Written in 2007. This is from my own perspective of family and friends, and of love.
© 2015 - 2024 diddles25
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Overall
Vision Originality
Technique ImpactFirstly, I like the fact that this foreign poem is translated in English. I also like the translation of the poem in itself. In addition, I really adore how you, the poet, can bring me back to memories of my younger life among family and relatives; needless to say, I am very impressed with your choice of words here.
I must also say that even though this poem could have been a little bit longer it still sends a message of salvation and bondage. And even though some things in the poem seem to throw things together like a salad it also condenses it to a bowl of unforgettable reminiscence.
With that said, I give you a 4.5 on vision, a 4.5 on originality, a 4 on technique, and a 4.5 on impact, giving you a grand total of 17.5 out of a possible 20. You did an amazing job with this, by the way, so big ups!